User blog comment:Mh314159/new YIP notation/@comment-39585023-20190714235606/@comment-39585023-20190718160046

Hmmm, things are not progressing as strongly as I had hoped and I also seem to be making a lot of formal errors, increasingly so as I try to write richer relationships. I think I'm now probably in over my head again. Thank you very much for the feedback, but I'm not sure I can correct my formal errors or progress much further.