User blog comment:Nnn6nnn/Proposed Constitution!!!!!!!!!!!!!/@comment-24061664-20180514055029/@comment-24061664-20180514105845

OK, now I understand what you mean. Just some suggestions to make it more clear.

Bureaucrats should give the role of administrators according to the vote (also in Article II Section III)

Now I understand that the first sentence is about the vote. The reasons that it was difficult to understand were


 * in Article II Section II, "vote of the proposed policy change" and "vote towards any policy change proposal" imply that the vote is only for policy change. They should be changed to "proposal".
 * In Article II Section III, "vote" is not used in the first sentence. I would suggest changing the first sentence to: "The GWiki shall have administrators, given or revoken the role by a proposal agreed with a vote, as seen in Article II Section II."

Study the user rights in this page. Administrators can be revoked by bureaucrats.

http://community.wikia.com/wiki/Help:User_access_levels

Article III Section I: they shall ignore 'nothing'!

Then why do you say "overlook" which also has the meaning of "ignore"? This community has variety of non-native users and English should be plain and clear. Change it to more appropriate one.